April 3, 2008...4:56 pm

Another short form for NaPoWriMo: The De Chiriku!

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Giorgio de Chirico, The Enigma of a Day, 1914

 

lone sarcophagus
even shadows have shadows
stone men search the sky

 

I am officially coining a new poetic form in honor of the painting of De Chirico, the De Chiriku! I’m sort of joking about the title of the form, but since it’s short and fun, I thougt it might be an interesting way to write a poem for the mad month of April, while enjoying some amazing artwork at the same time.

The process is simple: choose a De Chirico painting, and write a haiku about how the images speak to you. You’ll find that many of the paintings include references to mythology and archetypal symbols, which might provoke visceral responses.

Another process I tried was to free-write for twenty mintues while looking at a De Chirico painting. I then gleaned images and thoughts from the free-write to compose a free-verse poem. This is my usual method of writing, although typically I’m not looking at a painting. I often free-write about dream images, writing prompts, and memories. The work comes out of these stream of consciousness musings, and after several revisions a poem begins to emerge.

De Chirico was an Italian surrealist painter. He knew the French poet Guillaume Apollinaire while he lived in Paris, and was also involved with the Dada movement. You can read more about his life and influences at the MoMa website.

14 Comments

  • I admire his paintings very much, and I like your new poetic creation, cool name too, I might give it a go next week (I’ll credit you, of course) as I like writing from paintings too, find them very inspirational. But back to your ku, the central line is very powerful, very striking and goes really well with the work. Well done, as always!

  • Each of your three lines has possibilites for a longer poem! And together, they make a wonderful haiku. I am not familiar with this artist. Thank you for introducing him. I have used some art lessons from the Dadas with my art students. Very fun!

    Great ideas for future writing!

  • i am a fan of dada and surrealism…and i like your idea. i also got a lot out of your post describing how you develop your poetry from free-writing. i usually get a sudden inspiration and i take it from there but haven’t tried your approach yet, but i think i will do that. thanks for sharing!

  • Funnily enough, I do enjoy writing poetry from visual images, which is one reason why I like the Monday Mural. I also find music quite helpful. The reason that I’m ambivalent about free-writes is that i did a creative writing course where they were held up to be the answer to everything (I exaggerate a little). I don’t always find this the best way to begin although the poem of mine for 3WW that you liked did come from a free-write.

    I like the ideas in your poem: shadows having shadows and lone men searching the sky.

  • jan, I write that way too. It just depends on my mood. Thanks for stopping by.

    jo, no need to credit! Isn’t De Chirico cool?

    I know what you mean jill. I don’t write very many haiku. I seem to need a wider canvas. But I couldn’t resist the De Chiriku as a poetic form!

  • i am so copying you again… i have already located the painting i want to use… be back later with a link… you are so clever!!!!!!

  • you crack me up with all these forms. you sound like you’re having so much fun!

  • i put mine on the ink pot… heres a link….
    the de chiriku!

    this was so much fun… hope you don’t mind me being a copy cat!!!!!

  • My dad and stepmom used to have a De Chirico print in their living room, a different one, but this post made me feel like I was back there. Nice wordplay in your new poetic form. And the haiku was lovely! I think it’s so important to have fun with the whole NaPoWriMo thing.

  • paisley, we all copy each other! Besides, I’m sharing this so others will have fun with it. It’s a game, don’t you think?

  • Very impressed you are doing NaPoWriMo here.
    The second line in today’s poem really is fantastic. It has a nice sound to it and is filled with depth.

  • Thanks, Sara! Are you doing the thirty poems in thirty days? I’ll stop by Shores of My Dreams.

  • you know, this could work with just any artist. I’m thinking of doing a poem with a Georgia O’Keeffe’s painting but De Chirico artwork are just as interesting to write about.

  • I forgot to mention how much I like the second line. The poem works really well with the painting.

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