May 2, 2008...3:46 pm

have low expectations to avoid disappointment

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The Channel at Gravelines, Evening, by Georges Seurat, 1890. From MOMA, NYC.

have low expectations to avoid disappointment

At dusk the Port of Gravelines
is a pastel place. Mauve and amber
clouds seep into a blue-gray sea.
A spray of tiny waves
settles on your skin.
You lick your lips and think of grapefruit.

When the stars come out
you wander along the canal
in search of a tovarich,
a comrade or two. Why you think
tovarich you don’t know. You enter
the nearest pub.

The bartender will count
your glasses of wine with an abacus.
Each click of the wooden beads
will remind you of how good it feels to be drunk,
how you must keep the flow of wine
in the blood, how if two glasses
feels good, three or four will be better.

When two rabbits hop on stools
to your left and right, you’ll try not to show
surprise. You’ll invite them with glad grace
to a glass of sherry, a plate of fried
anchovies, a tiny dish of black olives.

You’ll walk to your hotel avec tes amis
down empty cobbled streets,
slippery from a recent shower.
A pigeon will shit on your head.
The rabbits will laugh, not bothering
to hide their glee. You will scrape
the viscous sludge from your brow
with a crumpled napkin from the pub.
Farther along you’ll find
a fountain. You’ll lean your head
under a cherub’s mouth and rinse
your hair beneath a stream of water.
You’ll climb the stairs to a garret
room, and forget to invite the rabbits
up for a nightcap.

*~*

Poefusion: a pigeon, an abacus, tovarich, two rabbits, Gravelines

12 Comments

  • having read the process over at poefusion i was interested in how this worked out… a fun read and cohesive too…

    a lot of my prose is really poetry,, without the line breaks,,, and i can see that here as well…

  • Beautiful art poem, captures the mood of the painting with a real sense of place and loved the almostsurreal touches, have you read peterandthehare’s writing, this reminded me of his work with its delicacy and careful attention to detail, lovely,

  • Very surreal, almost dreamlike. I like it.

  • paul, I have read peter and the hare, and really love his writing. I enjoy the hare as a a recurring character. I’ve also learned of interesting writers on his blog.

  • paisley, almost everything I write comes out of a free-write. What was different about this is piece is that I wrote the words on cards and drew them at random while I was writing, and I made a rule for myself that I had to immediately use the word. Later I took the free-write and used it as raw material for the poem. I chopped and shaved and rearranged. So, what you see here is not the free-write.

  • You’ve made the artwork come alive with your tale. I love the line a pigeon will shit on your head because it recalls a memory I have of my friend on a date with a guy she had just recently started dating. It was 4th of July and we were standing around talking before heading over to the carnival rides when a bird circled around our heads and shit on her made up hair. Thanks for the trip down memory lane. You asked me where I came up with these words… well, the first three (a pigeon, two rabbits & an abacus) was actually in a picture I saw while blog jumping. Tovarich I came across in the dictionary during National Poetry Month and gravelines is actually in one the found poems I wrote a long while back. Again, your poem is great. You are always on top of your game. Have a nice night.

  • Awesome!! I think the poem’s better than the painting… It paints a clearer picture… :)

  • you are able to combine totally ‘unlikely’ things and make them come together so nicely! christine, i’d be honored to be on your blogroll…you mentioned something about it to me on a post a few days ago…i never got back to you. also, yes, i try to look in the mirror and believe i’m beautiful…or even, don’t look in the mirror and believe it…all women ’should’…we’re all beautiful–and that includes YOU!

  • Incredible, this moves so well, is a perfect example of surreal, love the shitting pigeon and the laughing rabbits, amazing.

  • noahthegreat
    May 3, 2008 at 9:05 am

    This is great.

  • Delightful! I am amazed at how prolific you are. Each time I log in there are two, three, four new posts, most poems. All this writing is paying off. It is so good!

  • Christine, this and the previous post have such a delightful magical-realism quality. It’s like all the dream pieces you were writing for awhile are now bearing fruit, or eggs, or rabbits on barstools. There is the kind of humor I love about all the magical-realist prose writers. I’m not familiar with poets who use that approach. Just you.

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